02-23-2016, 09:20 AM
Maybe it's just me, but I really just see a list of adjectives with no corresponding nouns, followed by a "void." It doesn't create anything very poetic to me.
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona