02-22-2016, 09:12 PM
Personally, I think some lines can be written in a shorter and more concise while retaining their original meaning. For example, the second line
"Is it fair to say,
Shuffled, life must be."
Also, I prefer cutting poem into stanzas to leaving the poems as a wall of text.
"Is it fair to say,
Shuffled, life must be."
Also, I prefer cutting poem into stanzas to leaving the poems as a wall of text.