02-22-2016, 02:41 PM
Julius, I have to agree with billy and milo, I think moving out of Novice would help you dig in a bit more. I love aging love poems, they can have a depth, a reality, an appreciation and a wit that comes with sticking around long enough to find that perspective.
While this poem has an intimacy I enjoy and I can see your work moving forward, don't be afraid to hit a nerve. Even gentle can be unique and memorable.
While this poem has an intimacy I enjoy and I can see your work moving forward, don't be afraid to hit a nerve. Even gentle can be unique and memorable.
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