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Samsara
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02-22-2016, 03:40 AM
Although the stench of death is a cliche it certainly does its job. If you can think of something else that sets the scene as well I guess it would be an improvement, it was effective enough to not bother me.
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RE: Samsara - by ellajam - 02-22-2016, 02:33 AM
RE: Samsara - by Achebe - 02-22-2016, 02:44 AM
RE: Samsara - by milo - 02-22-2016, 03:10 AM
RE: Samsara - by Magpie - 02-22-2016, 05:40 AM
RE: Samsara - by milo - 02-22-2016, 06:17 AM
RE: Samsara - by ellajam - 02-22-2016, 03:40 AM
RE: Samsara - by milo - 02-22-2016, 04:20 AM
RE: Samsara - by ellajam - 02-22-2016, 05:02 AM
RE: Samsara - by Weeded - 02-22-2016, 03:53 PM
RE: Samsara - by milo - 02-22-2016, 11:59 PM
RE: Samsara - by Leanne - 02-23-2016, 04:15 AM
RE: Samsara - by milo - 02-23-2016, 04:32 AM
RE: Samsara - by Leanne - 02-23-2016, 04:52 AM
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RE: Samsara - by Achebe - 02-24-2016, 09:23 AM
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RE: Samsara - by Erthona - 02-24-2016, 11:38 PM
RE: Samsara - by milo - 02-25-2016, 03:56 AM
RE: Samsara - by ellajam - 02-25-2016, 03:25 AM
RE: Samsara - by milo - 02-26-2016, 12:23 PM
RE: Samsara - by Erthona - 02-25-2016, 06:40 AM
RE: Samsara - by milo - 02-25-2016, 07:44 AM
RE: Samsara - by Erthona - 02-25-2016, 10:29 PM
RE: Samsara - by milo - 02-25-2016, 11:59 PM
RE: Samsara - by Erthona - 02-27-2016, 12:08 AM
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