02-18-2016, 01:06 PM
billy: it's too long? dang, sorry -- can this whole thing be moved to misc, instead? as for the cheese, i'm a bit indifferent, actually, since i recognized this was mozzarella the moment i started writing this, though i didn't expect that specific line to have killed it (for me, the main marker was the end couplet). and at least it's not so cheesy to have a message too irredeemable -- though i don't expect to make this any more, er, memorable any time soon.
dale: do i really have to put it in quote marks? it's a slightly paraphrased fragment ("Until love pleases") of a verse (SoS 8:4) from an uncopyrghted translation (just remembered, both ASV and KJV, which read the same) of one of the oldest holy-libraries in the world, and putting it in quote marks or italics would make the message more, er, muddled, for me.
dale: do i really have to put it in quote marks? it's a slightly paraphrased fragment ("Until love pleases") of a verse (SoS 8:4) from an uncopyrghted translation (just remembered, both ASV and KJV, which read the same) of one of the oldest holy-libraries in the world, and putting it in quote marks or italics would make the message more, er, muddled, for me.