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Shelly Bojangles
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02-18-2016, 01:11 AM
I wonder if a colon would be better than the comma in the first line. I sorta like this -- I don't know who "Shelly" is, and it's been too long since I heard "Mr. Bojangles", so I know I'm missing something, and it kinda hurts. But I do like the richness, whose meaning is too well-packed to put in words, for now.
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Shelly Bojangles - by newsclippings - 02-16-2016, 02:41 PM
RE: Shelly Bojangles - by Achebe - 02-17-2016, 11:20 AM
RE: Shelly Bojangles - by newsclippings - 02-17-2016, 01:22 PM
RE: Shelly Bojangles - by RiverNotch - 02-18-2016, 01:11 AM
RE: Shelly Bojangles - by Erthona - 02-20-2016, 04:17 AM
RE: Shelly Bojangles - by newsclippings - 02-20-2016, 11:15 AM
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