Shelly Bojangles
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(02-17-2016, 11:20 AM)Achebe Wrote:  
(02-16-2016, 02:41 PM)newsclippings Wrote:  Her hair wasn't strong, if bile was dye
to color hair, she bought it.
At night she puckered, lips to mirror,
cherry liner, nude center.

In her coffer, jelly dick depot
wiggled, jerked; she fingered through,
considered purple, decided blue.
loved L3, L4, and all of the second strophe. 
'jelly dick depot' is delightfully rich in nuance.

'some jelly dick depot on your toast, dorothea dear?'
Hahahaha. Hah. Yes. Thank you for the generous feedback Achebe.
I'll be there in a minute.
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Messages In This Thread
Shelly Bojangles - by newsclippings - 02-16-2016, 02:41 PM
RE: Shelly Bojangles - by Achebe - 02-17-2016, 11:20 AM
RE: Shelly Bojangles - by newsclippings - 02-17-2016, 01:22 PM
RE: Shelly Bojangles - by RiverNotch - 02-18-2016, 01:11 AM
RE: Shelly Bojangles - by Erthona - 02-20-2016, 04:17 AM
RE: Shelly Bojangles - by newsclippings - 02-20-2016, 11:15 AM



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