02-16-2016, 01:34 PM
Useless Blueprint, you did a fine job. Let's all try to follow that lead and remember that we're here to help the OP make the best poem possible. Please crit the poem along with your comments. Thanks, ella
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips

