Valentine
#3
The best Valentines
are beaten to death
then beheaded.


Maybe that's better, but of course completely, completely different. Basically, the lover is asking his beloved to be more Jesus than Jesus, yet somehow compared his life-before-death with drowning, because silly me really wanted to rhyme "spume" and "perfume" (there's a proper reason why the comparison was done, but I forgot that watching Deadpool yesterday. The movie....depends a lot on a person's kind of humor. I liked it. But I would have loved it if its satire was, well, actual satire -- the only "cool" thing about it, really, was Ryan Reynolds, who was born to play the role.)
Reply


Messages In This Thread
Valentine - by RiverNotch - 02-13-2016, 12:43 AM
RE: Valentine - by Erthona - 02-13-2016, 01:33 PM
RE: Valentine - by RiverNotch - 02-16-2016, 12:51 AM
RE: Valentine - by Erthona - 02-19-2016, 05:07 AM
RE: Valentine - by RiverNotch - 02-21-2016, 12:59 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!