02-16-2016, 12:40 AM
*knees the poet*
I would go:
"Wear it on your heart
for everyone to see --
then put it on your back:
when you tire, take a knee..."
Then again, I'm not that consistent punctuating poetically. Just remove the white space, or put it on all lines -- the inconsistency robs this of, er, something.
I don't know about wearing it on the heart for everyone to see, morally. I'm still confused about the subject -- if we should pray in the closet, why should we show our great faith to the world? how could we be joyful if we must always repent? heck, how could we be humble if we have to speak -- But maybe I'm just being silly, again.
I would go:
"Wear it on your heart
for everyone to see --
then put it on your back:
when you tire, take a knee..."
Then again, I'm not that consistent punctuating poetically. Just remove the white space, or put it on all lines -- the inconsistency robs this of, er, something.
I don't know about wearing it on the heart for everyone to see, morally. I'm still confused about the subject -- if we should pray in the closet, why should we show our great faith to the world? how could we be joyful if we must always repent? heck, how could we be humble if we have to speak -- But maybe I'm just being silly, again.