Thoughts on an unknown Lady

Thoughts on an unknown Lady

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02-15-2016, 08:45 PM

Thank you both for your useful suggestions. I have made some changes using them and hope you feel the poem is improved. Note, the dots are an aid to reading aloud when I intend to briefly pause as if searching for the right thing to say.

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Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by Julius - 02-14-2016, 12:49 AM

RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by aschueler - 02-14-2016, 01:36 AM

RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by just mercedes - 02-14-2016, 05:41 AM

RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by Julius - 02-14-2016, 08:59 PM

RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by aschueler - 02-15-2016, 01:22 AM

RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by Julius - 02-14-2016, 07:06 AM

RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by aschueler - 02-14-2016, 09:14 AM

RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by Julius - 02-15-2016, 08:45 PM

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