02-15-2016, 04:59 AM
As the pronouns refer to the leaves I see no problem with the usage, although the less one can get away with even here the better.
Falling leaves that ride the breeze
colors are a joy to see.
Gusts carry leaves sadly
as they glide gladly
from places (which) used to be. (forced rhyme w/o the "which")
Best,
dale
Falling leaves that ride the breeze
colors are a joy to see.
Gusts carry leaves sadly
as they glide gladly
from places (which) used to be. (forced rhyme w/o the "which")
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.