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02-14-2016, 09:01 AM

(02-14-2016, 05:44 AM)just mercedes Wrote: Nice. I agree with Erthona about the commas, but not about the spelling of 'neighbour'. Great first stanza. It probably says enough.

Yes, but needs beer in there somwhere.

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Backyard - by Wjames - 02-13-2016, 08:22 AM

RE: Backyard - by Erthona - 02-13-2016, 12:03 PM

RE: Backyard - by aschueler - 02-13-2016, 08:39 PM

RE: Backyard - by just mercedes - 02-14-2016, 05:44 AM

RE: Backyard - by aschueler - 02-14-2016, 09:01 AM

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