02-14-2016, 07:06 AM
(02-14-2016, 12:49 AM)Julius Wrote: ( I belong to a writer's group and we are tasked with writing, poetry or prose, about a photo we were all given. I will attempt to attach a copy of the photo to this piece and would be grateful for any feedback)
Thoughts on an Unknown Lady
Good day Madam......
or perhaps Bonjour Madame,
for there is a certain look
a certain je ne sais quoi
about you.
You are not young
yet you pose on a chair,
legs crossed
in elegant modesty.
Perhaps you were once on display,
a cinema screen or catwalk perhaps......
in your younger years.
You dress yourself in black
confidently.
You know your jewellery will add
style,
Sophistication,
go well with black;
and so I must wonder......
Why the red hat?
(I have been unable to insert a jpg image from my desktop - please try to imagine a fairly elderly, rather elegant lady dressed in black wearing a large red hat)
(02-14-2016, 01:36 AM)aschueler Wrote: Interesting, will post more later, but the ellipses disturb me more than help with flowThank you for reading, I do hope you come backĀ
