Thoughts on an unknown Lady
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I don't like the repeats of 'certain' and 'perhaps', and the ellipses add nothing. In fact they're not ellipses, just a row of dots, annoying. I wonder if the woman is a member of The Red Hat Society? http://redhatsociety.com/about/mission
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Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by Julius - 02-14-2016, 12:49 AM
RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by aschueler - 02-14-2016, 01:36 AM
RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by just mercedes - 02-14-2016, 05:41 AM
RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by Julius - 02-14-2016, 08:59 PM
RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by aschueler - 02-15-2016, 01:22 AM
RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by Julius - 02-14-2016, 07:06 AM
RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by aschueler - 02-14-2016, 09:14 AM
RE: Thoughts on an unknown Lady - by Julius - 02-15-2016, 08:45 PM



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