02-10-2016, 12:59 PM
Q,
Thanks for the feedback. I actually did read that piece (I forgot the name/author but I do know which one you're talking about) in the middle of writing this one. I definitely noticed the similarity and from then on viewed it as a comparative tool, I hope the author doesnt think I stole their idea or anything like that tho..
But anyway, i like your ideas, I will definitely condense the first half after hearing this. And yeahh, the narrator is kind of a crazy guy in this one and sees mad-men in cell phones etc haha. Thanks again for your thoughts,
mike
Thanks for the feedback. I actually did read that piece (I forgot the name/author but I do know which one you're talking about) in the middle of writing this one. I definitely noticed the similarity and from then on viewed it as a comparative tool, I hope the author doesnt think I stole their idea or anything like that tho..
But anyway, i like your ideas, I will definitely condense the first half after hearing this. And yeahh, the narrator is kind of a crazy guy in this one and sees mad-men in cell phones etc haha. Thanks again for your thoughts,
mike
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