Materialization of a dream

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Thats what poetry is, another form of human expression. Something I've learned while being on here is that sometimes tho, the pieces that mean the most to you will mean nothing to others. Its true that on some level the poem needs to be personal, but you also need to think about the intent of your piece, as well as your audience. After reading this piece, im left wondering what the intent is. If it is indeed just a pondering on the title, then I don't think its enough to reach others, imo. Believe me, ive got notebooks full of shitty poems that will never be shared, so I know where you're coming from! That said, i think Erthonas suggestions are an excellent place to start with this one. And i know you said its difficult for you since you didn't graduate from high school, but being a hs drop-out(technically, i got my GED) as well id say that's just an excuse, especially if you have a computer! Its never too late to start learning that which interests you good luck,
mike