Falling Fruit

Falling Fruit

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02-09-2016, 06:13 AM

Thanks Paul, some excellent suggestions and catches. Yeah, the inversions, not intentional. Some days my dyslexia is just stronger than others. Not sure the extra "of" helps in S2L3, makes it sound like a horse galloping, at least today. everything else I can take on.

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Falling Fruit - by Erthona - 02-09-2016, 01:19 AM

RE: Falling Fruit - by Tiger the Lion - 02-09-2016, 02:24 AM

RE: Falling Fruit - by Erthona - 02-09-2016, 06:13 AM

RE: Falling Fruit - by RiverNotch - 02-09-2016, 01:54 PM

RE: Falling Fruit - by Erthona - 02-10-2016, 12:51 AM

RE: Falling Fruit - by tectak - 02-11-2016, 06:43 AM

RE: Falling Fruit - by Erthona - 02-12-2016, 02:56 AM

RE: Falling Fruit - by tectak - 02-12-2016, 04:50 AM

RE: Falling Fruit - by Erthona - 02-13-2016, 04:56 AM

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