Landfill
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Yes, this makes it hard to breathe, and I wonder, will the narrator breathe any easier once the decomposition is complete? Maybe. Maybe not.

This is really well done, every time I come back to it I wonder all sorts of stuff.
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Landfill - by Wjames - 02-05-2016, 03:01 AM
RE: Landfill - by cidermaid - 02-07-2016, 11:36 PM
RE: Landfill - by advocaite - 02-08-2016, 09:31 AM
RE: Landfill - by ellajam - 02-08-2016, 09:43 AM
RE: Landfill - by RiverNotch - 02-09-2016, 02:50 PM
RE: Landfill - by nikkisto - 02-11-2016, 04:55 AM
RE: Landfill - by Wjames - 02-12-2016, 10:32 AM
RE: Landfill - by QDeathstar - 02-12-2016, 10:55 AM



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