02-07-2016, 09:39 AM
As a person who personally does not read poetry and finds many pieces uninteresting, this is one that surely kept me interested through the end. This poem takes me to a place deeper than the surface. Especially lines like "Heaven or rot. Hell or not" or "your final flight enlightens me". I'm new to these kind of things so I don't know if this feedback is helpful to you or not but I hope it is. I'm not really good at thinking of ways to improve things that are already good as they are.