|
I am the plus one
|
02-07-2016, 01:25 AM
Thanks for the input, Nikkisto, and you are absolutely right; it is scattered. That is my main issue with the poem, it all revolves around the same theme, but I don't feel as if it is connected into a single piece. I gonna try a few things, and see where that takes it.
Ok, I have made another major revision, that I hope will add some more cohesion to the poem. |
|
« Next Oldest | Next Newest »
|
| Messages In This Thread |
|
I am the plus one - by Jeremiahcp - 01-25-2016, 04:05 AM
RE: I am the plus one - by ellz483 - 01-25-2016, 12:18 PM
RE: I am the plus one - by Brujo - 01-26-2016, 05:56 AM
RE: I am the plus one - by Jeremiahcp - 01-26-2016, 11:53 PM
RE: I am the plus one - by QDeathstar - 01-27-2016, 12:33 AM
RE: I am the plus one - by Jeremiahcp - 02-05-2016, 01:21 AM
RE: I am the plus one - by Jeremiahcp - 02-06-2016, 12:23 AM
RE: I am the plus one - by nikkisto - 02-06-2016, 04:25 AM
RE: I am the plus one - by Jeremiahcp - 02-07-2016, 01:25 AM
RE: I am the plus one - by milo - 02-07-2016, 09:06 AM
RE: I am the plus one - by Jeremiahcp - 02-07-2016, 09:37 AM
RE: I am the plus one - by billy - 02-07-2016, 11:58 AM
RE: I am the plus one - by Jeremiahcp - 02-07-2016, 12:32 PM
|
