02-05-2016, 02:31 AM
Hi, nikkisto, welcome to the Pen.
Thank you for the critiques you've given already, they are just fine. All we ask is for a specific, honest account of your read, you'll receive the same.
The forms in Poetry Practice are fun to learn and you'll get plenty of help there. And the site can always use a little more purple and pancakes, looking forward to it. We have a pancake poem or two around here, I'm off to look for them.
Hope you enjoy the site.
Here's one.
Pancakes in the Stream

The forms in Poetry Practice are fun to learn and you'll get plenty of help there. And the site can always use a little more purple and pancakes, looking forward to it. We have a pancake poem or two around here, I'm off to look for them.
Hope you enjoy the site.

Here's one.
Pancakes in the Stream
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