02-01-2016, 10:48 AM
While evening sways the almond grove
and palm tree dates bloom on the beach,
your grandma slaves over the stove
to make a pie from summer peach.
--This feels incomplete. And the your grandma leaves me thinking a lot of what's going on? The Almond - Palm - Peach is not the best combination here which makes it a bit not so natural, and I would say peaches.
and palm tree dates bloom on the beach,
your grandma slaves over the stove
to make a pie from summer peach.
--This feels incomplete. And the your grandma leaves me thinking a lot of what's going on? The Almond - Palm - Peach is not the best combination here which makes it a bit not so natural, and I would say peaches.