02-01-2016, 01:23 AM
This is a nice image picture, unfortunately it reads like a run-on sentence, which it is. I see at least three sentences here. I see no reason for the rush, the poem does not imply "rush", and in fact one loses some of the more colorful and visual aspects by going through it so fast.
Best,
dale
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.