Solstice

[ellajam]

Hi, Akira, I've been enjoying this, strong images throughout, a solid yet airy read. Some notes below.

I count the people that stumble crossing
between, through and above the dark packs of snow
lining the edges of city blocks I'm fully in that place.
and storefronts warmed by insect-like
chatter from guided bodies and a half-broken radio; Guided bodies is my only nit, I just can't get my head around it and the sonics jolt.
and she is a little light taken by hand, the only observer I love the use of "light", it opens a whole bunch of possibilities for this line.
left in this squeezed sponge of a community, Also thought provoking.
eyes agape and head spinning
as winter plays peek-a-boo with I wouldn't have broken on with but I like it, it plays peekaboo with the last line.
its last fan.

There's an appealing completeness to this, the image sticks and there are openings to wander a bit. Thanks for posting it, lovely.