01-30-2016, 11:53 AM
So I was looking around the internet for stuff, and I came across an article on contemporary poets. I started reading some and I thought this guy Rickey Laurentiis was pretty cool but it's almost like he uses his own language(which I like), but heres a piece
I Saw I Dreamt Two Men
I saw I dreamt
Two men hoisted hung up not American the rope
Not closed on their breathing
But this rope tied them spine to spine somehow
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I read this at first and the first line almost seemed like the first thing I learned here(don't use words you don't need). Line two also makes sense to me, but barely. Is there some sort of metaphor here im missing or something? Heres the link if y'all are interested.
I Saw I Dreamt Two Men
I saw I dreamt
Two men hoisted hung up not American the rope
Not closed on their breathing
But this rope tied them spine to spine somehow
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I read this at first and the first line almost seemed like the first thing I learned here(don't use words you don't need). Line two also makes sense to me, but barely. Is there some sort of metaphor here im missing or something? Heres the link if y'all are interested.
Crit away