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Falling Leaves
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01-30-2016, 06:08 AM
I found this poem a gentle and pleasant read. I liked the see/sadly/gladly/bee rhyming scheme of the first stanza. It's a personal thing, but I would have got greater pleasure if that sort of rhyming was consistent for every stanza. It's your poem and this is only a feeling that I have that others may not agree with.
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Falling Leaves - by LukeSizemore - 01-28-2016, 11:52 PM
RE: Falling Leaves - by Frankee_thecat - 01-29-2016, 06:12 AM
RE: Falling Leaves - by LukeSizemore - 01-29-2016, 06:28 AM
RE: Falling Leaves - by Frankee_thecat - 01-29-2016, 07:22 AM
RE: Falling Leaves - by Julius - 01-30-2016, 06:08 AM
RE: Falling Leaves - by Brujo - 01-30-2016, 08:21 AM
RE: Falling Leaves - by LukeSizemore - 01-30-2016, 08:25 AM
RE: Falling Leaves - by R.W.Moore - 01-30-2016, 12:46 PM
RE: Falling Leaves - by ellajam - 02-07-2016, 07:39 AM
RE: Falling Leaves - by corey3236 - 02-07-2016, 09:39 AM
RE: Falling Leaves - by advocaite - 02-08-2016, 02:09 PM
RE: Falling Leaves - by rhoiyt - 02-09-2016, 05:33 AM
RE: Falling Leaves - by vishaksagar - 02-10-2016, 04:10 PM
RE: Falling Leaves - by Erthona - 02-15-2016, 04:59 AM
RE: Falling Leaves - by Shrewbe - 04-17-2016, 07:46 PM
RE: Falling Leaves - by IgorSShute - 04-23-2016, 05:59 PM
RE: Falling Leaves - by KittyL - 04-27-2016, 12:16 PM
RE: Falling Leaves - by humility - 04-27-2016, 11:49 PM
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