Falling Leaves

[Frankee_thecat]

wow that was so powerful :O

really readable, really structured

a fantastic ride! thank you.

I wonder if you can use "you and your"s
to make a clear relation between the leaves and something (someone, whatever),
who has fallen with grace and ease?

For sure when I hit "us to fall with Your Grace and ease"
I'm now thinking of a person & I hadn't up to then. I like that ending.
Put the big letters in there^ as e.g. of what I was suggesting before.

Mate I'm clutching. I really like this poem.