How to End an Affair

[Tiger the Lion]

Hey 71. I like the feel of this. It's as though she watching from outside, removed from herself. Some parts are unclear. 

Her mind has him— I think this enjambment is strong enough without the em dash
surrounded

Between them,
they share a cigarette a little redundant

Woman inhales, proof
she still breathes

Woman sees alone, this line is unclear
sees a kiss on her mouth

(Woman) hears a voice,
sees a mouth move

(Woman) watches “I should I think "woman" repeated loses effect quickly - try reading it aloud with the 3rd and 4th instances cut. 
be going"

going
through the door

feels herself being born
much too late

Hope some of that helps. Thanks for the read,
Paul