01-28-2016, 05:44 PM
That was very easy one the eye 
Loved it
Missed this bit below in the final version, embedded within the poem, it gave a nice kinda 'all creatures great and small' feel to it, if you know what I mean.
But I'm not complaining! Great job
Ignoring their arthritic knees,
they lived again in times gone by,
secretly pleased that no-one sees
a trickled tear, or hears them sigh.

Loved it
Missed this bit below in the final version, embedded within the poem, it gave a nice kinda 'all creatures great and small' feel to it, if you know what I mean.
But I'm not complaining! Great job

Ignoring their arthritic knees,
they lived again in times gone by,
secretly pleased that no-one sees
a trickled tear, or hears them sigh.

