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Old Folks at Home

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01-27-2016, 03:47 PM

The obvious pain in the piece was a bit too tepid for me, the language a little too un-emotive. It felt restrained. I'm a novice myself, so i can't offer any advice on structure, and of course, it's all a question of personal preference.

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Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-18-2016, 01:40 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Achebe - 01-18-2016, 04:42 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Mr. Poe-tato - 01-18-2016, 06:07 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by MaksCerenWylt - 01-18-2016, 08:14 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-19-2016, 05:22 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by ellajam - 01-19-2016, 01:16 PM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-20-2016, 10:08 PM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Erthona - 01-20-2016, 11:57 PM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by ellajam - 01-21-2016, 12:19 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-21-2016, 11:32 PM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Erthona - 01-22-2016, 03:24 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by BW BRINE - 01-22-2016, 06:26 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-23-2016, 05:21 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by aschueler - 01-22-2016, 08:23 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Erthona - 01-23-2016, 02:34 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by aschueler - 01-23-2016, 07:56 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Brujo - 01-25-2016, 03:30 AM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by LukeSizemore - 01-27-2016, 12:14 PM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Icon Zero - 01-27-2016, 03:47 PM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Frankee_thecat - 01-28-2016, 05:44 PM

RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-28-2016, 11:50 PM

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