01-27-2016, 01:11 AM
Oh well, I guess two “thumbs down” out of two says it all lol.
I do have to wonder what you might make out of some famous haiku that involve wild life without an element of seasonal reference. Note the use of capitals and that “The wren” makes a sentence.
Many buzzards feast
On animal on busy road
Change quickly happens
The wren
Earns his living
Noiselessly.
Kobayahsi Issa
An old silent pond...
A frog jumps into the pond,
splash! Silence again.
Matsuo Bashō
I do have to wonder what you might make out of some famous haiku that involve wild life without an element of seasonal reference. Note the use of capitals and that “The wren” makes a sentence.
Many buzzards feast
On animal on busy road
Change quickly happens
The wren
Earns his living
Noiselessly.
Kobayahsi Issa
An old silent pond...
A frog jumps into the pond,
splash! Silence again.
Matsuo Bashō