01-26-2016, 11:18 AM
I don't mind the question if it is answered. i do think rhetorical questions are best left to those who practice rhetoric, that is a speaker who wishes to get a crowd going. That's how such things are usually used, I have never found them to be effective in poems. Your poem.
dale
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

