01-26-2016, 09:43 AM
Erthona,
I had considered this as an alternate:
Why should rain rise in battle
against gravity?
To capture vain glimpses of the Sun
merely to crash back to murk.
However, I might also view the question has rhetorical, since the way the question is framed, the reader
know what the speaker thinks already.
Brujo, thanks for reading. Could you please explain what you mean with the regards to self expresion and rising in battle? A reading it now perhaps vain glimpses is also slightly tongue twister so I'll see what I can do about that.
I had considered this as an alternate:
Why should rain rise in battle
against gravity?
To capture vain glimpses of the Sun
merely to crash back to murk.
However, I might also view the question has rhetorical, since the way the question is framed, the reader
know what the speaker thinks already.
Brujo, thanks for reading. Could you please explain what you mean with the regards to self expresion and rising in battle? A reading it now perhaps vain glimpses is also slightly tongue twister so I'll see what I can do about that.