Futility edit 1
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I think asking questions weaken a poem. Doesn't the writer already know the answer, and if not, does he expect to get it from an audience who cannot respond? Why not make it a statement, does it lose anything?


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Futility edit 1 - by QDeathstar - 01-01-2016, 02:20 PM
RE: Futility - by Achebe - 01-01-2016, 06:52 PM
RE: Futility - by Emz - 01-01-2016, 08:56 PM
RE: Futility - by Apache - 01-02-2016, 04:56 AM
RE: Futility - by REW - 01-02-2016, 09:40 AM
RE: Futility - by tomoffing - 01-02-2016, 11:48 AM
RE: Futility - by mlund - 01-03-2016, 05:05 AM
RE: Futility - by MAE27 - 01-03-2016, 08:23 AM
RE: Futility - by QDeathstar - 01-25-2016, 11:05 AM
RE: Futility edit 1 - by milo - 01-25-2016, 11:41 AM
RE: Futility edit 1 - by QDeathstar - 01-25-2016, 11:54 AM
RE: Futility edit 1 - by Brujo - 01-26-2016, 06:19 AM
RE: Futility edit 1 - by Erthona - 01-26-2016, 07:06 AM
RE: Futility edit 1 - by QDeathstar - 01-26-2016, 09:43 AM
RE: Futility edit 1 - by Brujo - 01-27-2016, 03:24 AM
RE: Futility edit 1 - by Erthona - 01-26-2016, 11:18 AM



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