01-24-2016, 11:10 PM
Lack of punctuation and grammar is a lack of knowledge and skill, not a style. To avoid using both indicates that one is either incapable of doing so, or one does not realize the serious lack of clarity that doing without them causes.
"Everyday you stalk and with goofy faces you like to mock--> who? Or is this a general mocking?
"end" and "friends" are rhymes, the "s" doesn't matter, not to the brain when reading it, it only matters as a technicality (it is neither a slant, nor off rhyme, though the two are the same thing). The syntax is tortured to get stalk and mock to the point of being end rhymes.
"I beg you to reason
but you imitate me again"
The speaker is begging his reflection to reason? Reflections are not alive neither do they reason, unless this is happening in an alternative universe, which has not been set up, so one must assume it is the reflection of the general kind.
"my only revenge
is to tell all my friends
the man in the mirror
is a real jerk"
This is completely nonsensical. Not only would any friends the speaker has would flee, thinking he had, had a psychotic break, one cannot get revenge on one's reflection. Pure gibberish.
Best,
dale
"Everyday you stalk and with goofy faces you like to mock--> who? Or is this a general mocking?
"end" and "friends" are rhymes, the "s" doesn't matter, not to the brain when reading it, it only matters as a technicality (it is neither a slant, nor off rhyme, though the two are the same thing). The syntax is tortured to get stalk and mock to the point of being end rhymes.
"I beg you to reason
but you imitate me again"
The speaker is begging his reflection to reason? Reflections are not alive neither do they reason, unless this is happening in an alternative universe, which has not been set up, so one must assume it is the reflection of the general kind.
"my only revenge
is to tell all my friends
the man in the mirror
is a real jerk"
This is completely nonsensical. Not only would any friends the speaker has would flee, thinking he had, had a psychotic break, one cannot get revenge on one's reflection. Pure gibberish.
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.