First Poem: Abyss of the Mind

[the french these days]

I think this is a great starting point--for sure it's better than mentioning stars, love, doves etc. To reciprocate everyone else like, yeah, this is totally abstract, my man. Try and imagine a scenario in which the thought you had when you wrote this was materialized in the concrete world, besides, you always wanna try and show--not tell. Show all that philosophical rose stuff my dude.