< poetry and masturbation >

[rayheinrich]

Hey Ray you could be huge on Tumblr, or so I've heard.

I'm HUGE on Snapchat.     (Tumblr isn't hip enough for my entropically dense  metaphor.)

As far as the poem goes, the picture is great

Yes, must agree, words are passé.

Personally I like everything before the "or". In fact I thought you were offering the reader a choice. The first or the second. I go with the first, of course one has to be cautious about doggy style. Maybe cutting a hole in the bed for the fin to slide through.

Not if she's on top.

There is one thing I'll say, the only beautiful masturbation is preformed by a woman, men look like dogs humping the air.

Woman look like they're scratching a yeast infection.

PS Instead of calling her "The Beauty and the Beast" I would have called her the "Beautiful Beast".

You'll have to take that up with Bioy Grillet as he's the one who titled it "La belle et la bête".
Given my SciFi mindset, I'd have called it "SharkMaid".