Old Folks at Home
#16
I appreciate the response, although stronger than I anticipated. I certainly wasn't intending to indicate a deficiency in the system, but more a suggestion -- and a question -- toward moving this forward, assuming the author feels he would like to.


To Julius:
I am quite new here, but I do note Erthona is quite helpful with frank advice and suggestions that are well thought. I am suprised you haven't studied poetry much, as this one is quite good. Getting meter down so quickly is no mean feet. I wanted to dislike this, but I can't.


Messages In This Thread
Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-18-2016, 01:40 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Achebe - 01-18-2016, 04:42 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Mr. Poe-tato - 01-18-2016, 06:07 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by MaksCerenWylt - 01-18-2016, 08:14 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-19-2016, 05:22 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by ellajam - 01-19-2016, 01:16 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-20-2016, 10:08 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Erthona - 01-20-2016, 11:57 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by ellajam - 01-21-2016, 12:19 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-21-2016, 11:32 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Erthona - 01-22-2016, 03:24 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by BW BRINE - 01-22-2016, 06:26 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-23-2016, 05:21 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by aschueler - 01-22-2016, 08:23 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Erthona - 01-23-2016, 02:34 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by aschueler - 01-23-2016, 07:56 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Brujo - 01-25-2016, 03:30 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by LukeSizemore - 01-27-2016, 12:14 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Icon Zero - 01-27-2016, 03:47 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Frankee_thecat - 01-28-2016, 05:44 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-28-2016, 11:50 PM



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