01-23-2016, 03:55 AM
This is definitely very abstract, as stated in some above replies. It is also short. Extremely short. When you're starting off, you should be careful about writing something very short or very long. I would also suggest that you look at some guides/tips regarding poetry. I found the one linked in ellajam's signature to pretty informative. It all basically starts out with reading more poetry, as Erthona mentioned here. Read read read.
On a side note, I recommend you don't throw little bits like this away, I read another thread on this site where some of the writers said they gave themselves "permission to write crap," as it could be of use at a later time.
On a side note, I recommend you don't throw little bits like this away, I read another thread on this site where some of the writers said they gave themselves "permission to write crap," as it could be of use at a later time.
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona