01-22-2016, 08:33 PM
Hi 71. I just want to make sure that when you edit you keep
"the night father screamed at you
to leave his room so he could die,"
I love that you included this, and as one of the things we know as nothing else. The words of a cranky dying person slip in while our hearts are wide open and stay there. I appreciate you writing about it.
"the night father screamed at you
to leave his room so he could die,"
I love that you included this, and as one of the things we know as nothing else. The words of a cranky dying person slip in while our hearts are wide open and stay there. I appreciate you writing about it.
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