01-22-2016, 01:03 PM
(01-22-2016, 07:30 AM)Wjames Wrote: While evening sways the almond groveWhy "your" grandma? Why not "my" or drop it altogether? Just a thought. I like the progression of thoughts...almost geographically taking me through California in four lines. Not an easy thing to do.
and palm tree dates bloom on the beach,
your grandma slaves over the stove
to make a pie from summer peach.

