Private - See? [Edit 2]
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Private - See?

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From altitude, each new-built suburb looks
Quite different.  In vistas of its streets,
Viewed from the ground, McMansions crowd like books
On bookshelf-roads, beyond which eyesight meets
Brick walls, a man-made lake or leafy wood.
Developments seem closed, each one a cell
Which no one’s gated yet, but surely could
Self-seal hermetically if darkness fell.
Yet, bird’s-eye viewed, stark borders that concealed -
Walls climbable, lakes raftable, thin belts
Of trees that seemed deep forest - lie revealed
As social follies:  separation melts.
    How simple, if all trust in what they see,
    To slake the house-proud lust for privacy.

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From altitude, each new-built suburb looks
Quite different.  In the vistas of its streets,
Viewed from the ground, McMansions crowd like books
On bookshelf-roads, beyond which eyesight meets
Brick walls, a man-made lake or leafy wood.
Developments seem closed, each one a cell
Which no one’s gated yet, but surely could
Self-seal hermetically if darkness fell.
Yet, bird’s-eye viewed, stark borders that concealed -
Walls climbable, lakes raftable, thin belts
Of trees that seemed deep forest - lie revealed
As social follies:  separation melts.
    How simple, if all trust in what they see,
    To slake the house-proud lust for privacy.

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From altitude, each new-built suburb looks
Quite different.  In the vistas of its streets,
Viewed from the ground, McMansions crowd like books
On bookshelf-roads, beyond which eyesight meets
Brick walls, a man-made lake or leafy wood.
Developments seem closed, each one a cell
Which no one’s gated yet, but surely could
Be sealed hermetically if darkness fell.
Yet viewed from high up, borders that concealed -
Walls climbable, lakes raftable, thin belts
Of trees that seemed deep forest - stand revealed
As artful follies:  separation melts.
    How simple, if all trust in what they see,
    To slake the house-proud lust for privacy.


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Messages In This Thread
Private - See? [Edit 2] - by dukealien - 01-20-2016, 12:35 AM
RE: Private - See? - by REW - 01-20-2016, 10:00 AM
RE: Private - See? - by polesofie - 01-21-2016, 08:31 AM
RE: Private - See? - by billy - 01-21-2016, 11:50 AM
RE: Private - See? - by dukealien - 01-21-2016, 01:13 PM
RE: Private - See? - by Akira - 01-21-2016, 05:57 PM
RE: Private - See? - by Erthona - 01-22-2016, 12:22 AM
RE: Private - See? - by dukealien - 01-22-2016, 11:28 PM
RE: Private - See? [Edit 1] - by Erthona - 01-23-2016, 03:15 AM
RE: Private - See? [Edit 1] - by dukealien - 01-23-2016, 07:56 AM
RE: Private - See? [Edit 1] - by Erthona - 01-23-2016, 08:08 AM
RE: Private - See? [Edit 1] - by ellajam - 01-23-2016, 10:24 AM
RE: Private - See? [Edit 1] - by Erthona - 01-23-2016, 10:48 AM
RE: Private - See? [Edit 1] - by dukealien - 01-25-2016, 07:17 AM
RE: Private - See? [Edit 2] - by Erthona - 01-25-2016, 08:38 AM



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