01-20-2016, 12:21 AM
Lots of fun for me, much more interesting than I thought it would be, what a sea of images. My favorite lines after a few reads are "Years of twisting beneath demonism" and "shifty women debating monasteries" but that may change, the whole of it is surprisingly readable, there's a lot I like here and your might use some of it as a springboard. Thanks for posting it, much enjoyed.
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