01-19-2016, 03:39 PM
Thank you Snarling,
Yes, especially the second part brings up the picture of a theaterplay.
Thank you Billy,
I really like the idea of trying to get rid of the rhymes in Shy Lady Moon. I always seem to need rhymes to pull my poems along. I have recently been wondering, if the same thing putting boundries on you is inspiring me. But now the poem is here in its idea, I could actually try and lose the rhyme.
Yes, especially the second part brings up the picture of a theaterplay.
Thank you Billy,
I really like the idea of trying to get rid of the rhymes in Shy Lady Moon. I always seem to need rhymes to pull my poems along. I have recently been wondering, if the same thing putting boundries on you is inspiring me. But now the poem is here in its idea, I could actually try and lose the rhyme.