Everyday you stalk me

[ClaytonDaury]

Find a word that rhymes in the end rather than jerk or asshole. Even a more powerful or detailed word would easily change the emotion to the poem, if you wanted that. Wording was good but you only rhyme half the time, every second line (see what I did there) so you try to keep up that style throughout the poem. Good piece though, this poem really is a great piece of work in progress!