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Old Folks at Home
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01-19-2016, 05:22 AM
Thank you all for your suggestions, most of which I have incorporated. I'm glad it was quite well liked. I'm not too sure about the position of the full stop at the end of line 4. What is between the inverted commas is a quote with the end of the sentence following the quote. As I say, I'm not too sure about it.
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Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-18-2016, 01:40 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Achebe - 01-18-2016, 04:42 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Mr. Poe-tato - 01-18-2016, 06:07 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by MaksCerenWylt - 01-18-2016, 08:14 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-19-2016, 05:22 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by ellajam - 01-19-2016, 01:16 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-20-2016, 10:08 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Erthona - 01-20-2016, 11:57 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by ellajam - 01-21-2016, 12:19 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-21-2016, 11:32 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Erthona - 01-22-2016, 03:24 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by BW BRINE - 01-22-2016, 06:26 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-23-2016, 05:21 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by aschueler - 01-22-2016, 08:23 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Erthona - 01-23-2016, 02:34 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by aschueler - 01-23-2016, 07:56 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Brujo - 01-25-2016, 03:30 AM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by LukeSizemore - 01-27-2016, 12:14 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Icon Zero - 01-27-2016, 03:47 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Frankee_thecat - 01-28-2016, 05:44 PM
RE: Old Folks at Home - by Julius - 01-28-2016, 11:50 PM
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