Karma in HD
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I especially like your image. However, I would like to see the poem as an haiku without the title, since I agree with the first comment in that regard. Just the word "karma" would make a perfect last line, even thought I like the sound of "thwap," to me, it's redundant.
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Karma in HD - by Tiger the Lion - 01-05-2016, 12:55 PM
RE: Karma in HD - by ellajam - 01-05-2016, 01:23 PM
RE: Karma in HD - by Magpie - 01-09-2016, 04:30 PM
RE: Karma in HD - by Emz - 01-09-2016, 06:04 PM
RE: Karma in HD - by Tiger the Lion - 01-10-2016, 04:28 AM
RE: Karma in HD - by Jeremiahcp - 01-10-2016, 04:51 AM
RE: Karma in HD - by Tiger the Lion - 01-13-2016, 11:14 AM
RE: Karma in HD - by sharon rhutasel - 01-19-2016, 05:07 AM



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