01-18-2016, 01:32 AM
I realise I'm new to the forum, but I am having difficulty seeing this list as poetry. To me it seems nothing more than a list of, mostly sensible, things not to do and when not to do them. I see from your profile that you are an experienced poet so a few words of explanation about what I should see as poetry would be welcomed. By the way I am over 70 so you had better keep your car in the garage when I am out and about in mine lol.
