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Father Died

Father Died
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01-17-2016, 09:08 AM
Ive read this a few times and each time I read it I want to comment on the last two stanzas... but I've kinda thought about it and actually, I can't really figure out what the benifit of including them is. I think the poem says all it needs to say the opening stanza...
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Father Died - by 71degrees - 01-10-2016, 04:33 AM
RE: Father Died - by REW - 01-10-2016, 10:13 AM
RE: Father Died - by 71degrees - 01-17-2016, 01:24 AM
RE: Father Died - by Achebe - 01-11-2016, 06:12 PM
RE: Father Died - by Alexearth - 01-13-2016, 12:51 AM
RE: Father Died - by QDeathstar - 01-17-2016, 09:08 AM
RE: Father Died - by 71degrees - 01-22-2016, 12:58 PM
RE: Father Died - by Laxschmi - 01-21-2016, 02:26 PM
RE: Father Died - by ellajam - 01-22-2016, 08:33 PM
RE: Father Died - by 71degrees - 01-23-2016, 12:51 AM
RE: Father Died - by just mercedes - 01-23-2016, 07:52 AM



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